P5

Evaluation

After evaluating the feedback, I can see that my script overall is fairly good and reflects the genre of Sci-Fi nicely. Also, in terms of corrections, the corrections can be solved quite easily and don't require any major changes to the entire script as a whole.

Examples of corrections include:
- Have a wider range of vocab by looking for synonyms
- Make interaction with both characters longer
- Replace ... with a dash
- Slow down pace
- Include Louis' daughter more 
- Add more description on page 1
- Only make characters name in caps for the first time they're mentioned