Page by Page Summary

PAGE 1/2

For page 1, I will be talking about Louis' hometown and his laboratory.

For this page, the intention of it will be to write something which shows the audience that his hometown (North London) is a place which is dreadful to live in and his lab is somewhere which is perfect to be a part of - almost like an escape from the real world.

This page should help teach the audience that Louis as a person has always isolated himself from the real world (his hometown) and has made this lab his 'hometown' so that he can stay away from trouble.

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For page 2, Louis will begin to create the time machine.

For this page, the intention of it will be to write something which shows the audience that Louis as a person is hard-working and determined to get things done. Also, Louis will perform certain actions on this page to show the audience that making the time machine a success is Louis' only goal.

Actions include:
Multi-tasking (e.g.eating and planning at once)
Instantly declining phone calls
Isolating himself from everyone (Locking himself in the lab)

For page 3, Louis will continue to make the time machine and at this moment, his child Harper will walk in and will try and convince her dad that he isn't going to be successful in making this machine. 

For this page, the intention of it will be to write something which shows the audience that Harper is quite immature in terms of the way she speaks but she is also trying to be as convincing as possible.

This will lead to Louis feeling fairly upset but it will also encourage him, even more, to make the machine successfully so he can prove her wrong. 

PAGE 4

For page 4, Louis will do the last touch-ups to the machine and plan what he will use the machine for. At this moment, he will use the machine as a test run to see the result.

For this page, the intention of it will be to write something which shows the audience that the time machine becomes a success, and it causes Louis to go back in time to 100 years ago, but it causes Louis to be trapped in the past for a few days.

However, the atmosphere of North London a hundred years ago will be something which Louis instantly fits in with and doesn't ever want to leave.

PAGE 5

For page 5, Louis will be examining the scene. 

For this page, the intention of it will be to write something which shows the audience that perhaps, Louis living in the olden times is more of a home for him than the present. Also, the description of the past will seem as though it is another world, but a world which is made for Louis.

PAGE 6

For page 6, Louis is still trapped in the past and meets a character named Azeeda (Azeeda will be a human at first but will transform into an alien later on)

For this page, the intention of it will be to write something which shows the audience that this character who he meets (Azeeda) is a nice character on the outside, but on the inside, she is manipulative and evil.

PAGE 7

For page 7, Louis is working on the machine to figure out the problem of why he is trapped in the past. Azeeda will also help with this

For this page, the intention of it will be to write something which shows the audience that regardless of how big the problem is, Louis is still always determined to get work done.

PAGE 8

For page 8, Louis gets the machine working, however before he sets off to get back to the present, he decides to go and bid farewell to Azeeda.

For this page, the intention of it will be to write something which shows the audience that Azeeda is evil and manipulative because, on this page, Azeeda will turn into an alien and will be telling her army of aliens her plan to take over planet earth using Louis' machine to get there.

PAGE 9

For page 9, Louis overhears the plan of Queen Azeeda's and realizes that he needs to take immediate action to prevent danger happening to Planet Earth. 

For this page, the intention of it will be to write something which shows the audience that even though Louis is a fairly quiet person who isolates himself away from society a lot, if he is aware of danger, he will do all he can to stop it - even if it means stepping out of his comfort zone.

PAGE 10

For page 10, Louis will rush back to the time machine and attempt to make his way back to earth so he can save everyone on Planet Earth.

For this page, the intention of it will be to write something which shows the audience that Louis is feeling helpless at this point and he is unaware of what to do.

Also, at this point, the aliens will use Louis' time machine before he had the chance to use it and would have already reached earth before him.